The specifics were where I personally lost interest in your message. The saying "the devil is in the details" is true. And this is a place where that couldn't be more true. Having stated that, allow me to tell you what did work. Perhaps because your writing is so interesting, I am taking the time to leave a remark. I don't do it on a consistent basis. Second, even while I can definitely see the logical leaps you make, I'm not really sure how you seem to connect the concepts that lead to the actual outcome
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